Writing Love Poetry: Part 2

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By Denny Lyon

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A Humorous Way to Look at Writing Romance Poetry

Love Poetry - original poem included:  The Interesting Man

In the first article - Writing Love Poetry - there was an example given of how to write about love in an indirect manner. It demonstrated a way that was more subtle than the obvious loudly expressive passionate declaration of love so commonly written in the past century of notable literature. That poem depicted in a unique way the unusual relationship between long-married people who were complete opposites.

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Photo by linda yvonne at flickr – "If you feed them, they will come" philosophy of mating!

Elements of Romance Writing

Romance Poetry

According to the Romance Writers of America site romance writing basically qualifies if it has a love story as the main focus of the write. Most romance writing relies heavily upon the belief of emotional justice - that good people are rewarded and evil people are punished. The lovers are supposed to struggle for each other and demonstrate unconditional love. Also, the ending must be optimistic and emotionally satisfying for the reader. In the past decade the definition in the romance writing world has changed a lot and become a less restrictive and predictable formula. More complex characters and plot lines have finally developed along with historical and futuristic settings. This isn't your grandmother's romance writing anymore.

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Photo by Lin Pernille at flickr – L - O - V - E

Romance Writing Industry Statistics

Before you scoff and scowl much more consider just how large a business romance writing truly is. The 2007 statistics are that romance fiction generated close to $1.4 billion in sales compared to $819 million for religion/inspirational, a close second. Almost 8100 titles were released that same year. One in five people who read books in 2007 read a romance novel. Romance novels made up the biggest fiction category too. Romance readers are so demanding they keep the publishers hopping to please. They want new writers on a regular basis.

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Photo by notsogoodphotography at flickr

Romance Love Poetry

Romance is another concept of love poetry to consider writing. Romance is generally defined as a brief intense love affair where the relationship is often idealized because it is exciting. Romance writing often expresses or evokes tender emotions. True, this is also an area known as chic novels. Your writing doesn't have to be the drug store version that gets churned out for mass consumption and summer beach reading. Write a short poetry version. You would be surprised how many ways you can interpret romance. In the following poem I considered romance poetry as a prolonged tension-filled tease.

Last summer I experienced an unusual and intense romance. That man was so charming and magnetic that he had me at Hello! It isn't what you consider to be the usual romance - or is it? Read on and enjoy a good chuckle. I know that intense moment stayed with me for so long that I had to write about that shameless pick-up artist. I met him at an outdoor food market one early August summer morning.

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Poem: The Interesting Man



An interesting man I one day met

Downtown he lazily strolled near

The Saturday morning food market

 

He was long retired, happily

He took his well muscled relaxing ease

He eyed all the prettiest ladies

 

His attention rested first upon me

Other women took notice of us

Magnetized, a horde drifted our way

 

Loving his chilled demeanor we remarked

A steady gaze he wore like a fine silk suit

Ethan was his name

 

Ethan loved women

And women loved Ethan

 

Many men, riveting their gaze,

Feeling threatened and

Too curious, turned our way,

"Who is this guy causing such a stir?"

 

As the crowd swelled more

In a tight and intimate embrace

I cupped my hand to his throat

Ethan shifted his weight obligingly

 

He leaned into me, eagerly greeting my hand

"He's a leaner," offered his embarrassed young friend

Again, and again, I stroked Ethan ever so gently

 

A woman in the growing crowd loudly declared,

Certainly for All too loudly well heard,

 

"So, you say he's retired from the race track?

And a Red Brindle Greyhound breed at that?!"

 

Ethan grinned.

That famous Greyhound smiling grin.

 

Ethan loved women

And women,

 

Well,

 

We loved Ethan.

 

Sigh...

 


Denny Lyon

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Photo by liza31337 at flickr
Photo by liza31337 at flickr
Photo by liza31337 at flickr

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More Poetry Articles by Denny Lyon

Writing Humor Poetry - Too often poetry is used to exclusively express exultation or terrible sadness. Humor can also be considered as more than a comedic rhyme. Ancient teachings: Humor is good for the soul and brings the gift of merriment to the heart. Why not try your hand at an amusing poem to lift your heart?

Writing Love Poetry (part one) - This first article about love poetry is another writing idea of how to approach the vast subject of a love relationship from the perspective of "opposites attract." This is a subtly techniqued exampled of declaring love.


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Photo Credits

Please take a moment to view the generous photographers over at flickr who make their work available freely for online content writers. They are delightful people with a wide variety of photos for everyone to enjoy so take a look! The following links will get you to their personal pages at flickr:

Photo by Kjunstorm at flickr - Great Flamingos

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girlgenius 3 years ago

Ha ha ha ha

Thanks for another great hub!

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girlgenius 3 years ago

Ha ha ha ha

Thanks for another great hub!

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Denny Lyon Hub Author 3 years ago

Thank you girlgenius, glad you enjoyed!

Thank you also to everyone else who read this hub. In the past 6 weeks since it was published this poetry hub has had almost 1,000 views as of this writing! OK, wow! for such a small interest group that sure is a lot of reads everyone, thank you so much!

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maricarbo 3 years ago

Ha ha, this was great....I actually have an Italian Greyhound, a miniature one, and she is the most lovable being....she loves to cuddle under the blankets at night.

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Denny Lyon Hub Author 3 years ago

Hi, maricarbo, thanks for visiting! The tiny greyhounds are absolutely adorable, lucky you!

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Frieda Babbley Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

Denny, I love this, what a fantastic poem at the end. That really was fun!

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Denny Lyon Hub Author 2 years ago

Hi, Frieda, thanks for visiting! You HAD to meet that dog; he was really a charmer! :)

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WRKennedy 2 years ago

Lovely story!

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Denny Lyon Hub Author 2 years ago

Hi, WRKennedy, thanks for stopping by for a visit! Since I wrote that poem, Ethan and his 4-footed pals were no longer allowed at the street market because of one complaint, so the city reluctantly played killjoy. Business dropped by 50% and the ambience, well, that flat lined by a 100% without fun paw people like Ethan to entertain! :)

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Deborah-Lynn 2 years ago

You know that animals do have love emotions and we have a duty to not break their loyal hearts! I loved your poem soooo much!

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Denny Lyon Hub Author 2 years ago

Hi, Deborah-Lynn, thanks for stopping by for a visit! Sorry to take so long to catch up over here. Catch up with me at The Social Poets blog - http://thesocialpoets.blogspot.com. Currently, writing on my 12 blogs, trying to get them up to daily posts. Come visit! Poetry on Fridays at The Social Poets.

Hilongos 22 months ago

What makes poetry so wonderful is the fact that it involves all of life, every concern, every desire, and every feeling. If something has some great significance to a person’s existence, then it has a great significance in poetry as well.

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Shealy Healy 22 months ago

Lovely....lovely....poety...

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Denny Lyon Hub Author 22 months ago

Hi, Hilongos, thank you for your insightful comment about poets in general! :)

Hi, Shealy Healy, thanks for the kind compliment.

To find more poetry I've parked it over at 2 blogs now:

http://TheSocialPoets.blogspot.com

http://PoemsFromASpiritualHeart.blogspot.com

Thanks for stopping by for a visit, everyone, much appreciated!

Bhart1989 19 months ago

I love poems

karaoke 16 months ago

hahaha...

What a great hub!

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louisxfourie 10 months ago

LOL ... LOVE your poem

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very niece pic it page

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